Tuesday, November 22, 2005

Television on Mute.




The swirling of air, the fastness of breath, the sound of crying, the shadow of talking, the whisper of love, sight of syllable, touch of sense, loading of the gun, the burning desire, wretched anger, soft pain, revenge in the eyes, Power of the speech, the chirping of the birds, kiss of the ocean with the sun, ringing of the phone, expressing hate, snatching peace, colliding matter, honking of the train, friction of the wheel, scream of the mute, silence of the sound, rumbling of the breeze, strum of the strings, eclipse of the sun, essence of the kiss, communicating by symbols, strength in numbers, cold in winters, stillness in movement, reflex in the action, weakness of the cemetry, frightening background's, emotional attachments, respite from thrist, pleading for life, cracking of the dawn, chirping of the birds, snow from the black and white, fading memories with no stress, pinching-pink on the face, alliterating altars for the sane, mortal perils for the fit, shreik of death, hiss of alertness, thrill of madness, decrypting the script, spreading the myth, senselessness of commercials, random image changes, confessing the done, stringing the scattered, point of arguement and transition of time.

Television on mute, aint it funny,
How would you express love,
How would you wana hate
How may have the clouds rumbled,
What may caused all the pain,
The stiffness in the mobile,
Longness in the short,
How could we refer to the cold of winter,
Suffer in the chemical chambers of the Discovery Channel,
Sang aloud with Lennon,
May be we might have not noticed the televison at all.


5 comments:

BEAST FCD said...

Brilliant writing, I must say.

The only poems I have ever written so far are either too X-rated, or used as satires to instigate anger.

Your poems are quite original, I must say. Perhaps you might want to consider doing it on a more consistent basis.

Regards
The Beast

Dovic 23 said...

Thanks Atheist and Beast, yes i am tryin to write more but then the walls of my mind restrict myself to the seen and believed, wish i could see through them, to get a clearer vision.

Anonymous said...

Brilliant...just makes u think and think this blog....very very orignal and so from the heart...

Dovic 23 said...

Thank You.

Aparna Mudi said...

hey
i guess u write really well but u r quite complex...ure good.please keep posting and yes correct ur link addresses i was looking forward to ur other blogs...dissapointing
cheers
aparna(orkut)